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PostPosted: Tue Dec 06, 2016 2:06 pm 
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A friend and I started a story in the alpha section (although I feel it is way over my head at times.) with the focus on three different two different tribes of animals.

Plot:
The Ursains and Atma Kabile have declared war on each other. Across the countries, they wage battles against each other and the small human tribes that populate Europe and Asia.

It is the general gist of the story, Plotting Section if you are interested.

If you haven't seen it yet, here is The Great Tribes.

We were hoping for some feedback, since we like reading other stories made by users on the site. So, we set up this thread in hopes that you would comment on the story that we were making. Please post any ideas, feedback, etc. below. :)

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Have you read The Jedi Path? We would love to have your feedback.

How about The Great Tribes? Just started a feedback here.


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